Burial (2nd revision)
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the stanza “I thought I could stand its strength as stone” makes me think of the subject struck by some emotion too dire to process.
unfortunately I do not get which emotion – at least I m not sure if it is the death of a loved person.
the next stanzas to me convey strongly the horrifying experience of being buried alive. maybe that is what results of suppressing emotions (very wild guess).
what I, again, don-t understand is what the “ ghosts off-shore” are.
I think this is an interesting read, though it leaves me a little frustrated for not quite understanding the intended message.
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Burial (2nd revision) - by burrealist - 03-25-2017, 02:32 AM
RE: Burial - by CRNDLSM - 03-26-2017, 06:18 AM
RE: Burial - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:21 AM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by vagabond - 05-15-2017, 07:24 AM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by tectak - 05-16-2017, 11:54 PM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by burrealist - 05-17-2017, 06:53 AM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by tectak - 05-17-2017, 03:15 PM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by just mercedes - 05-17-2017, 07:21 AM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by billy - 05-17-2017, 09:55 AM
RE: Burial (1st revision) - by burrealist - 05-18-2017, 03:26 AM
RE: Burial (2nd revision) - by burrealist - 05-20-2017, 04:31 AM



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