05-14-2017, 09:14 PM
(05-14-2017, 05:12 AM)rayheinrich Wrote: visuals of gradually increasing stanzas.That's it. I wasn't being able to place what I liked so much about this poem
Lovely work
(05-14-2017, 05:12 AM)rayheinrich Wrote: visuals of gradually increasing stanzas.That's it. I wasn't being able to place what I liked so much about this poem
Lovely work
The tension builds up beautifully and explodes quietly into fireworks in the last line
Well done
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

