a stone is just a stone
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(05-14-2017, 05:12 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  visuals of gradually increasing stanzas.
 
That's it. I wasn't being able to place what I liked so much about this poem
Lovely work

(05-14-2017, 05:12 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  visuals of gradually increasing stanzas.
 
That's it. I wasn't being able to place what I liked so much about this poem
Lovely work 
The tension builds up beautifully and explodes quietly into fireworks in the last line
Well done
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Messages In This Thread
a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-13-2017, 07:36 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by Brownlie - 05-13-2017, 05:41 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-13-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by nibbed - 05-14-2017, 01:23 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by CRNDLSM - 05-14-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-14-2017, 05:11 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 05:12 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-14-2017, 05:28 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 05:43 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by Achebe - 05-14-2017, 09:14 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by 67eager - 05-14-2017, 05:39 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 06:28 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by billy - 05-14-2017, 08:54 PM



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