a stone is just a stone
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Took me a while, but I just don't like the spacing 

(05-13-2017, 07:36 AM)vagabond Wrote:  a stone is just a stone
 
still
and dead
how close then
would I have to get

to see This too close to 'to feel' I'd say lose one, but maybe just move it

to feel
the atoms dance
and sparkle in the void
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-13-2017, 07:36 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by Brownlie - 05-13-2017, 05:41 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-13-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by nibbed - 05-14-2017, 01:23 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by CRNDLSM - 05-14-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-14-2017, 05:11 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 05:12 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by vagabond - 05-14-2017, 05:28 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 05:43 AM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by Achebe - 05-14-2017, 09:14 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by 67eager - 05-14-2017, 05:39 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by rayheinrich - 05-14-2017, 06:28 PM
RE: a stone is just a stone - by billy - 05-14-2017, 08:54 PM



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