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(05-12-2017, 09:52 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(05-12-2017, 07:09 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(05-12-2017, 04:51 AM)vagabond Wrote:  ... i may be very far off, but this is what i think about when reading the poem

While I could provide a detailed explication (most of it has a logical basis and a linear narrative),
that was not the purpose of this poem. If it was, I would have written a short fiction or historical non-fiction piece.
In this poem, as in most of my poetry, you're supposed to create a meaning/story/feeling
that's all your own (I have one, but I consider it all my own and don't want to bias your creation).
This is a lovely explanation of poetry. Sometimes I write one like that and I love it like a jewel, so much fun to see
people focus on a facet while I know I've turned it every which way.

There is a difference between vagueness and a poem with its seeds firmly planted but the final product still wondered about.
As you know. Smile  

Hi, Ray. Smile

YES!
Why in the f-ing world would you read poetry if you don't want to participate!

Swings on a play-ground and poems... it's more fun when you take turns.

And how could anyone read poetry and not participate?

Answer: They can't.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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< all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-02-2016, 10:01 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Erthona - 11-03-2016, 03:12 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-04-2016, 02:30 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Lizzie - 11-03-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 11-04-2016, 07:06 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 04:51 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 05-12-2017, 09:52 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-13-2017, 05:51 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by nibbed - 05-12-2017, 07:49 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 08:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 09:23 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by billy - 05-14-2017, 08:54 AM



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