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(05-12-2017, 08:15 AM)vagabond Wrote:  
(05-12-2017, 08:09 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(05-12-2017, 07:49 AM)nibbed Wrote:  < all day at the dump >
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Hi, rayheinrich- This poem spoken rolls nicely. It's dripping with something, not frustration or sarcasm...I'm not quite sure, maybe disappointment? I think there is much room for misinterpretation. I see it as a very thoughtful reminder, too. The very best wishes to you.
janine

Thanks. Not misinterpretation, but interpretation. It's designed to encourage you to wander your mind.

... manic joy occasioned by the beauty of the world and the despair of a life lost...
so the last 3 lines of the poem are somehow back to the manic side? i am sorry, i just keep trying...

That's OK, I'm in pathetic need of attention. It's either be nice to you guys or find
someone twice my size, piss them off, and masochistically enjoy my suffering.

Nice is better as I don't have to get out of this chair thereby upsetting the cat sleeping in my lap.

"somehow back to the manic side?"
more like waiting/begging/bragging for/about the next manic episode

Ray
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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< all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-02-2016, 10:01 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Erthona - 11-03-2016, 03:12 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-04-2016, 02:30 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Lizzie - 11-03-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 11-04-2016, 07:06 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 04:51 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 05-12-2017, 09:52 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-13-2017, 05:51 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by nibbed - 05-12-2017, 07:49 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 08:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 09:23 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by billy - 05-14-2017, 08:54 AM



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