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(05-12-2017, 08:09 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(05-12-2017, 07:49 AM)nibbed Wrote:  < all day at the dump >
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Hi, rayheinrich- This poem spoken rolls nicely. It's dripping with something, not frustration or sarcasm...I'm not quite sure, maybe disappointment? I think there is much room for misinterpretation. I see it as a very thoughtful reminder, too. The very best wishes to you.
janine

Thanks. Not misinterpretation, but interpretation. It's designed to encourage you to wander your mind.

... manic joy occasioned by the beauty of the world and the despair of a life lost...
so the last 3 lines of the poem are somehow back to the manic side? i am sorry, i just keep trying...
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Messages In This Thread
< all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-02-2016, 10:01 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Erthona - 11-03-2016, 03:12 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 11-04-2016, 02:30 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by Lizzie - 11-03-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 11-04-2016, 07:06 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 04:51 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by ellajam - 05-12-2017, 09:52 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-13-2017, 05:51 PM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by nibbed - 05-12-2017, 07:49 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 08:09 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 09:23 AM
RE: < all day at the dump > - by billy - 05-14-2017, 08:54 AM



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