05-12-2017, 03:18 AM
(05-11-2017, 04:39 AM)vagabond Wrote: oh my god, i recognized a rhythm, but not the pattern. embarrassing. thank you !
No need to be embarrassed; in fact, it makes me feel quite successful.
I intentionally try to hide the metricality. I want the rhythm to be integral to the
poem -- to be felt inside instead of being thought about... sometimes it works.
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