05-11-2017, 06:10 AM
(05-10-2017, 03:25 AM)LunaDeLore Wrote: I've read all three versions of the work and the second revision is my least favorite.I know what you mean. I'm trying to embody minimalism like everyone suggests. But the image needs to expand, as well.
crumpled papers skip astray
and scatter across the boulevard....

