Second Edit: Kings Road

Second Edit: Kings Road

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05-11-2017, 05:54 AM

Hey Mark,
Thanks for the feedback and kind words. I changed the last lines in the second stanza between the two versions of the poem. Based on your feedback, I think that change made a positive difference in the clarity of my message.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-03-2017, 09:35 PM

RE: Kings Road - by ellajam - 05-03-2017, 10:21 PM

RE: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-05-2017, 11:18 AM

RE: Kings Road - by nibbed - 05-05-2017, 12:00 PM

RE: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-05-2017, 12:13 PM

RE: Kings Road - by nibbed - 05-06-2017, 10:28 AM

RE: First Edit: Kings Road - by Mark Cecil - 05-10-2017, 08:45 PM

RE: First Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-11-2017, 05:54 AM

RE: Second Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 10-02-2017, 02:41 AM

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