for peter orlovsky in the sky
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(01-11-2010, 08:01 AM)mikebauer Wrote:  read it for 'tone' -- it's not a story: a poem is never a story, it's a picture of the author's brain function. you've got the pieces in this, now just trip them all together for a little walk around my head.
i think you're missing my point.

i want the poem to tell me what to do, not the author.
and to some extent that's what happening.

and everything's a story, it all tells us something. but that's off topic.
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for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 04:43 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 06:34 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 07:08 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 07:16 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 08:01 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by billy - 01-11-2010, 10:01 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-11-2010, 05:24 PM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 03:13 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-12-2010, 08:41 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 08:56 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by addy - 01-12-2010, 09:32 AM
RE: for peter orlovsky in the sky - by mikebauer - 01-12-2010, 10:00 AM



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