01-11-2010, 10:01 AM
(01-11-2010, 08:01 AM)mikebauer Wrote: read it for 'tone' -- it's not a story: a poem is never a story, it's a picture of the author's brain function. you've got the pieces in this, now just trip them all together for a little walk around my head.i think you're missing my point.
i want the poem to tell me what to do, not the author.
and to some extent that's what happening.
and everything's a story, it all tells us something. but that's off topic.
