< calming down >
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(05-10-2017, 03:22 AM)vagabond Wrote:  < Calming Down >
                        ...
                        years, but I came to realized he was right. What a relief: I could look          realize? 
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there is nothing to add to this poem.
and still the end leaves space for thoughts. lots of them.

    Thanks, just corrected it.
    And pat yourself on the back; you found one that milo missed.  Smile
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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< calming down > - by rayheinrich - 12-22-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: < calming down > - by ellajam - 12-22-2015, 11:52 PM
RE: < calming down > - by milo - 12-23-2015, 01:05 AM
RE: < calming down > - by Erthona - 12-23-2015, 01:08 AM
RE: < calming down > - by just mercedes - 12-23-2015, 03:29 AM
RE: < calming down > - by Leanne - 12-23-2015, 04:28 AM
RE: < calming down > - by Achebe - 12-23-2015, 06:55 AM
RE: < calming down > - by billy - 12-23-2015, 09:43 AM
RE: < calming down > - by rayheinrich - 12-23-2015, 02:38 PM
RE: &lt; calming down &gt; - by rayheinrich - 12-23-2015, 06:32 PM
RE: &lt; calming down &gt; - by Lizzie - 04-28-2017, 10:24 AM
RE: < calming down > - by vagabond - 05-10-2017, 03:22 AM
RE: < calming down > - by rayheinrich - 05-11-2017, 03:56 AM



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