the cure

[vagabond]

Fun read. I keep tripping on lead/ leads, maybe I'm missing something.The first two strophes are so strong but I spend the next two pedaling towards the end, which I like, so much better than a possible You stab me dead again, even if that's where it goes.

I think you express that moment well, thanks for the read.

i am actually surprised that you found something different than what i wanted to express AND it still works for you.
thank you.