05-10-2017, 07:53 PM
Fun read. I keep tripping on lead/ leads, maybe I'm missing something.The first two strophes are so strong but I spend the next two pedaling towards the end, which I like, so much better than a possible You stab me dead again, even if that's where it goes.
I think you express that moment well, thanks for the read.
I think you express that moment well, thanks for the read.
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