Zap!!! (Lyrics)
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(04-29-2017, 05:53 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  On a boat in the sky, we're floating on steam,
the sun and the moon, stars in between.
Gliding along the stream unseen,
where wind and misty water team,
the gleam in her eye begins to dream.
Electric language, whatever it means                       

Into the sea, the rocket ship slips.
Everything under the surface lip flips.
Urging forward, losing its grip,
the structure, ruptured, rips in strips
while sipping words that begin to drip
electric language, love eclipsed.

Traveling on this train in a trance,
a surging impulse serves to enhance
the primitive engine energy chants.
As tunnel walls crumble, extinguishing lamps,
heaven and earth merge at a glance.
Do we have what it takes to go the distance?         that last rhyme won´t fit in unless falsely intoned.

i am sorry, i gather neither meaning nor feeling from this..
so i can only comment for the sake of rhyme
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Zap!!! (Lyrics) - by CRNDLSM - 04-29-2017, 05:53 AM
RE: Zap!!! (Lyrics) - by vagabond - 05-10-2017, 04:08 AM
RE: Zap!!! (Lyrics) - by CRNDLSM - 05-10-2017, 06:36 AM



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