05-09-2017, 08:58 PM
how can i give criticism when i don´t have a clue what the author wanted to express? this would be stumbling around blind or at least severely visually impaired (i wear glasses by the way because i don´t want to be visually impaired).
once i have a glimpse of meaning/ message i can start to search for ideas how to transport said message better (if i can think of improvements).
without some discussion concerning the interpretation all i could say about this poem is: the meaning is not sufficiently clear but it transports feelings of denial and helplessness.
once i have a glimpse of meaning/ message i can start to search for ideas how to transport said message better (if i can think of improvements).
without some discussion concerning the interpretation all i could say about this poem is: the meaning is not sufficiently clear but it transports feelings of denial and helplessness.

