05-09-2017, 08:06 PM
the feeling of loneliness and depression is strong. i like the meter and rhyme.
i could read a double meaning into "trampling the corpses":
-those of the flowers as a metaphor to potential but unrealized tender relationships/ friendships.
-or the corpses of the sluts and playboys that are no substitute for the former. and it doesnt matter if the sluts are real or not since one can be very alone when together with other people.
despite the loneliness being self-imposed it is still intolerable without distraction (TV).
yes, i like that poem, much is said in few words.
(unfortunately i don´t know if daisy has a slang meaning besides the literal one.)
i could read a double meaning into "trampling the corpses":
-those of the flowers as a metaphor to potential but unrealized tender relationships/ friendships.
-or the corpses of the sluts and playboys that are no substitute for the former. and it doesnt matter if the sluts are real or not since one can be very alone when together with other people.
despite the loneliness being self-imposed it is still intolerable without distraction (TV).
yes, i like that poem, much is said in few words.
(unfortunately i don´t know if daisy has a slang meaning besides the literal one.)