4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month
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(05-07-2017, 11:32 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:                                                                            Fist
                                                               clenc       hed
                                                         to le            t       out
                                             the hatre            d.        Un s
                     poken, unable, un                             d       er 
too much pressure,                                                     an  d
                                                     bleeeee                   r        e
                                                                    e                a       d
                                                        togethere. we'll       y.
                                           the knife,             e
                               give me                           e
Give me your illness,                                    d.
talking point: although the poem seems truly eager to die, cutting vertical instead of horizontal, isn't the gash still too small?
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4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 04-30-2017, 02:01 PM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 04-30-2017, 02:15 PM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-01-2017, 01:35 PM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-02-2017, 05:13 AM
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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-03-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-06-2017, 09:01 AM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-06-2017, 11:46 AM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by RiverNotch - 05-08-2017, 01:34 AM
RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-18-2017, 11:38 AM
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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by saltysami - 06-29-2017, 06:05 PM
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