Make Doves No More
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Staying away from punctuation wounds, I really enjoyed the poem because i can relate to it so well we've all been there finding something to argue with. nice observation and well framed.
It reminded me of one night with an acid tab called white lightening, this damn thing play with the sky all night. thanks for the flash back. Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Make Doves No More - by shemthepenman - 05-06-2017, 11:32 PM
RE: Make Doves No More - by tectak - 05-07-2017, 04:23 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by shemthepenman - 05-07-2017, 06:52 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by nibbed - 05-07-2017, 04:56 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by just mercedes - 05-07-2017, 05:57 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by Keith - 05-07-2017, 07:14 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by dukealien - 05-07-2017, 08:30 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by CRNDLSM - 05-07-2017, 08:34 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by shemthepenman - 05-07-2017, 09:33 AM
RE: Make Doves No More - by Szczepan - 05-12-2017, 09:22 PM



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