Ice slip

[nibbed]

kolemath wrote:


Up
away
air
no ground
not a bird or plane
but will fall
spinning blur of rise then freeforall
gravity
pull
free fall
falling
seconds
but no time long
like a fish drowning in air
no breath
thud bruise bum
down

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I like your poetry, it is often on the light side
and I appreciate that. It is sort of a
palindrome, too, isn't it? When I saw
bird and plane together I stumbled in my mind
SUPERMAN. But that made it all the more
humorous. I hate slippin' on the ice!