Second Edit: Kings Road
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Kings Road

they repaved this road
since the last time
i visited
now the drive leaving home is smooth
as a promise in an election year                                                 good one

but that fresh pavement                                                              
is like the face of a gravestone
the yellow line an epitaph                                                            yellow, troubling
that will inspire
future generations



Hi Richard.
Who are the future generations?
Traffic cops?
Can the yellow line mean something else,
drawing a line, perhaps, crossing it?
Good poem.
I went in a few directions with it.
Thank you,

janine
there's always a better reason to love
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Second Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-03-2017, 09:35 PM
RE: Kings Road - by ellajam - 05-03-2017, 10:21 PM
RE: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-05-2017, 11:18 AM
RE: Kings Road - by nibbed - 05-05-2017, 12:00 PM
RE: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-05-2017, 12:13 PM
RE: Kings Road - by nibbed - 05-06-2017, 10:28 AM
RE: First Edit: Kings Road - by Mark Cecil - 05-10-2017, 08:45 PM
RE: First Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 05-11-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: Second Edit: Kings Road - by Richard - 10-02-2017, 02:41 AM



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