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I'm trying too hard.

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05-05-2017, 06:58 AM

For truly divine inspiration
an amphibrach brings you salvation
the rhythms compel us
though milo will tell us
it's merely a misappellation

It could be worse

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I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-03-2017, 08:27 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Leanne - 05-03-2017, 09:32 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Lizzie - 05-04-2017, 05:09 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 05:16 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Lizzie - 05-04-2017, 05:40 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 06:55 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Lizzie - 05-04-2017, 08:38 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Keith - 05-04-2017, 10:31 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by QDeathstar - 05-04-2017, 12:28 PM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2017, 12:41 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Lizzie - 05-05-2017, 01:15 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Leanne - 05-05-2017, 05:23 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by CRNDLSM - 05-05-2017, 06:43 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by just mercedes - 05-05-2017, 06:21 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Leanne - 05-05-2017, 06:23 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by Leanne - 05-05-2017, 06:58 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by rayheinrich - 05-07-2017, 04:13 PM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by ellajam - 05-07-2017, 08:43 PM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by rayheinrich - 05-08-2017, 01:10 PM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-10-2017, 02:19 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by rayheinrich - 05-11-2017, 03:46 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-11-2017, 06:08 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by QDeathstar - 05-11-2017, 10:26 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by burrealist - 05-16-2017, 04:43 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by rayheinrich - 05-16-2017, 07:56 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by billy - 05-16-2017, 09:48 AM

RE: I'm trying too hard. - by rayheinrich - 05-16-2017, 10:31 AM

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