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Eyes
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05-05-2017, 06:40 AM
You've got a great idea for this poem, and I like a lot of the structure. But you're not using much descriptive/ poetic language. You're saying the meaning of your poem rather than expressing it. Try to delve deeper into some of the topics introduced in this poem. But overall, it's got a great inspiration, just needs a bit more work!
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RE: Eyes - by canofworms - 02-09-2017, 12:43 PM
RE: Eyes - by worros - 03-07-2017, 03:10 PM
RE: Eyes - by burrealist - 03-22-2017, 09:42 AM
RE: Eyes - by Graca - 03-26-2017, 12:24 AM
RE: Eyes - by Franklin'sMan - 03-27-2017, 05:56 AM
RE: Eyes - by C.los - 04-24-2017, 09:23 AM
RE: Eyes - by wordgobbler - 04-26-2017, 12:55 PM
RE: Eyes - by AttnAttack - 04-29-2017, 03:09 AM
RE: Eyes - by Radetof.Yahska - 04-30-2017, 06:18 AM
RE: Eyes - by QueenFaye - 04-30-2017, 05:21 PM
RE: Eyes - by inmostcave - 05-01-2017, 09:43 AM
RE: Eyes - by Josiah - 05-05-2017, 06:40 AM
RE: Eyes - by spiritthebrave - 05-29-2017, 04:07 AM
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