a sound (revision 2)

a sound (revision 2)

Keith

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05-04-2017, 05:25 AM

I like the image of a writers toil slipping away but I think you should used something more original than scatter like leaves. It is just too bland for such a short piece. Best keith

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a sound (revision 2) - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 05:18 AM

RE: a sound - by Keith - 05-04-2017, 05:25 AM

RE: a sound - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 05:27 AM

RE: a sound - by nibbed - 05-04-2017, 06:07 AM

RE: a sound - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 06:52 AM

RE: a sound - by just mercedes - 05-04-2017, 07:19 AM

RE: a sound - by nibbed - 05-04-2017, 08:23 AM

RE: a sound - by burrealist - 05-04-2017, 07:23 AM

RE: a sound - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2017, 12:16 AM

RE: a sound - by burrealist - 05-10-2017, 02:33 AM

RE: a sound (revision 2) - by LunaDeLore - 05-10-2017, 03:25 AM

RE: a sound (revision 2) - by burrealist - 05-11-2017, 06:10 AM

RE: a sound (revision 2) - by LunaDeLore - 05-12-2017, 05:24 AM

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