Falling Toward Grace

[homer1950]

Hey Elizazile, some thoughts:

Growing through loneliness
Just don't let me end up like this --------------(like what?) Just (the way you are using it) is taking power away from the line. 
I figure all I can do --------------------- Is this something that is happening to you? Or something you are doing to pass the time?
Is wallow over you
Til alone gets great-----------------------Use of til instead of Until seems out of place
Or normal-----------------------------------Perhaps reverse lines, Until alone gets normal--------Or great
Til I've stayed up out of (your) arms-----------Same as above (not sure if you are using Til to sound more poetic?) 
Long enough to stop feeling phantoms
I think a little pain(,) might be the bridge 
From here to heaven
Or here to standing straight ----------again try reversing,  From here to standing straight --------- Or here to heaven (heaven is greater than straight)
And maybe one day
After falling (what seems like) forever with no net ----------can not fall forever and land
I'll land (,) soft and gentle
In my own life.