04-29-2017, 07:15 AM
Hey dukealien,
Thanks for the feedback. You gave such a wonderful analysis of of the last two lines in the original, I actually felt some guilt about changing it. However, most of the other readers seem to have issues with that couplet, so I went ahead and changed it. The more I post and read on here, the more I realize just how personal one's interpretation of a poem can be.
As for the title, I realized after all my edits that I hadn't thought much about the title change, so my title change wasn't the most thorough aspect of my revisions. The more I think about, the more I wish I had kept the original title as well.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. You gave such a wonderful analysis of of the last two lines in the original, I actually felt some guilt about changing it. However, most of the other readers seem to have issues with that couplet, so I went ahead and changed it. The more I post and read on here, the more I realize just how personal one's interpretation of a poem can be.
As for the title, I realized after all my edits that I hadn't thought much about the title change, so my title change wasn't the most thorough aspect of my revisions. The more I think about, the more I wish I had kept the original title as well.
Thanks again,
Richard