04-26-2017, 12:55 PM
Hi!
Well to start I really like the way you decided to format the poem it's interesting and really adds something to the way the reader reads it. I think the way you described the demons showing you what you've done like a movie is clever, as if they're watching some film on DVD but it's your life, it shows how they taunt you. Also, I really like how you chose the ending it really does give emphasis to the poem and hits hard. Good job on this one!
Well to start I really like the way you decided to format the poem it's interesting and really adds something to the way the reader reads it. I think the way you described the demons showing you what you've done like a movie is clever, as if they're watching some film on DVD but it's your life, it shows how they taunt you. Also, I really like how you chose the ending it really does give emphasis to the poem and hits hard. Good job on this one!