First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging
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Hey tectak and nibbed,
I greatly appreciate the feedback. I really like the grammar notes. I have been mostly writing poetry without any grammatical conventions, so it feels weird to be thinking about commas and semicolons, but in a poem like this, they are definitely a necessity. I don't think the word "genius" has ever been associated with anything I've written, so that made my day.

Thanks again,
Richard
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First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging - by Richard - 04-24-2017, 04:01 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by ellajam - 04-24-2017, 07:23 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by Richard - 04-24-2017, 07:51 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by dukealien - 04-24-2017, 08:31 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by headybeach - 04-24-2017, 10:38 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by Richard - 04-24-2017, 11:38 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by tectak - 04-24-2017, 10:29 PM
RE: Why We Fight - by nibbed - 04-25-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by Richard - 04-25-2017, 11:31 AM
RE: Why We Fight - by Achebe - 04-25-2017, 02:19 PM
RE: Why We Fight - by Richard - 04-26-2017, 12:25 PM
RE: First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging - by dukealien - 04-28-2017, 10:52 PM
RE: First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging - by Richard - 04-29-2017, 07:15 AM



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