Down at the Bottom
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Enjoyable read. Good natural flowing rhymes and meter as well as word choice. I imagine a melancholic feeling toward relationship(s) from learned past experiences. But staying true to the obligation to keep each other going through each struggle. Momentarily patching the trouble and keeping the feeling alive but "incessantly" keeps breaking down. Maybe it's a give and take or one person is holding the two together. Eventually it catches up to you and and you run out of answers and give in to letting go. Easy to read and understand. Smile
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Down at the Bottom - by 89layers - 09-13-2016, 04:09 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by DJesters - 09-13-2016, 06:31 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by 89layers - 09-13-2016, 08:01 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by homer1950 - 09-14-2016, 08:56 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by AngelaPinson - 04-23-2017, 04:22 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by 89layers - 09-15-2016, 01:51 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by HaleINthewind - 09-17-2016, 03:40 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by samsfeelingood - 04-20-2017, 12:13 AM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by Napalm - 04-24-2017, 02:02 PM
RE: Down at the Bottom - by nibbed - 04-25-2017, 03:45 AM



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