Eyes

[C.los]

It is a little vague in my opinion. It needs more detail. Words to describe your demons, how will they destroy you. When you read, you paint a picture in your mind of what you see. From reading your poem I see someone in bed afraid but don't really know why they're afraid. 

Here's another one I'm working on.

I'm in my bed wide awake,
     fighting demons my body wants but my heart hates. what does the body want, why does your heart hate of how

If I open my eyes 
     they're at my fingertips, ready to destroy me. Why/how? more detail

If I close my eyes
     they play a movie of all the things I've done. Whats going on?

I don't want to close my eyes
     because I'm afraid of what I'll see.

I don't want to open my eyes,
     but that pain is easier to bear.

So no matter what I do,
     I can't close my eyes.