04-22-2017, 06:54 PM
I'm not a fan of fate in any form, it happened so surely it was fateful. If you lose "how" you've gained a half foot to work with, maybe implicit or something down that path. Watered eyes falls flat for me no matter what you do with it. Brass-blasted is fair, I just hadn't gotten there, I might have. 
While I like the sound of clotted cream, it gets me only to the same place, sour but without the grapes. That's a big thought to get into a few feet, there may be a way, good luck with that.
While I like the sound of clotted cream, it gets me only to the same place, sour but without the grapes. That's a big thought to get into a few feet, there may be a way, good luck with that.
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