Senryu

[Keith]

Doves dog fight in flight,
brooding favours the brave,
white feathers falling.

It would ease the reading of the first line to hyphenate dog and fight: dog-fight. It's probably just me, but I get tripped up with doves and dog seeming momentarily to fight for position.

I think you can drop the commas altogether.

Since it doesn't seem like you're going for 5-7-5, I think you can just say "white feathers fall" in the last line.

Nicely done, Keith.

Hey Lizzie
Sorry I completely missed your comments, thanks for digging this one up, I like your suggestions so I did a quick edit, much appreciated. Best Keith