Loser

[Mark Cecil]

Title: Loser

Coffin carriers high
straight gaits pitch make cuff shoots - Really like the imagery created here particularly the phrase "cuff shoots" when I read that I think of the men carrying the coffin and the cuffs pointed out upwards from their jacket
cement steps over denomination trade Again love "cement steps" highlights the respectful but also sombre walk involved at funerals
holy water coolant drops
got ceiling fresco eyes Good at emphasising the coldness of the mood at a funeral
Altar ego trip Great play on words here and you pack so much meaning into these three words of how the priest might have an agenda at this funeral

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