LOVING HANDS
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Hey!  I really enjoyed this one, as I work at a school and I have both used and heard the term 'loving hands' when dealing with the younger students.  I like how you began the poem with words like sticky, grabbing, clingy.  To someone older, those aren't exactly words that you would use to define 'loving,' but to a young child none of that matters when it comes to their feelings about a person.  You did a great job showing that a child will gift you with their 'loving hands,' no matter where they have been before.  They give no second thought.
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LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 02-08-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by JaredEggo - 02-08-2017, 03:57 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 02-11-2017, 01:47 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Lizzie - 02-11-2017, 11:06 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Richard - 03-29-2017, 04:38 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by justinlion - 04-09-2017, 08:15 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by eharrison - 05-26-2017, 03:39 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by AmiL0wHi - 06-17-2017, 03:27 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by CNL - 06-17-2017, 04:37 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Voodoogirl - 06-26-2017, 03:39 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by ADUnser - 12-28-2017, 02:34 PM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by hesawacko - 04-25-2018, 08:36 AM
RE: LOVING HANDS - by Jackintheroom - 06-24-2018, 04:42 AM



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