The World I Choose Is At Shoprite
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(04-02-2017, 11:32 PM)ellajam Wrote:  A young cashier in hijab
rings up cases of kosher wine,
smiles "Happy Holiday"—
"You, too."
I spent a few days trying to think of something to critique. 
You even put "smiles", otherwise I would have asked how the cashier felt.
Otherwise, I'll keep thinking about it. And thinking. Smile
The best thing I can fork up is "What about atheists", but that's dumb. 
I didn't get oppression. Maybe it is, but for all we know, you've been saving up all year for the holidays.
Here, the dialogue suggests equality. (I don't believe equality is possible, but that's an opinion).
So far, so good! This is a pleasant escape from all the cynicism choking the masses.
Huh
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The World I Choose Is At Shoprite - by ellajam - 04-02-2017, 11:32 PM
RE: The World I Choose Is At Shoprite - by nibbed - 04-05-2017, 10:33 PM
RE: The World I Choose Is At Shoprite - by burrealist - 04-06-2017, 01:24 AM



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