04-04-2017, 11:46 AM
Richard, thank you for your critique. I may make an adjustment on "the blood" in some way and restore path to an end word.
To your questions:
1) in my mind about 8 years old
2) she loves her grandmother--and yes this isn't a flattering description so my statement is a little at odds with what I'm saying but there is a reason.
3) they have a good relationship. (see comment above)
Thank you again.
Best,
Todd
To your questions:
1) in my mind about 8 years old
2) she loves her grandmother--and yes this isn't a flattering description so my statement is a little at odds with what I'm saying but there is a reason.
3) they have a good relationship. (see comment above)
Thank you again.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson