03-31-2017, 01:16 PM
How long, how much water until
you can float?
I usually don't like blatant questions in poetry but I love this. It is simple and stark. I feel the sense that someone is patient and deserving for their time to let go.
I also love the threat of the bird at the end. He makes me unsettled in the best of ways.
you can float?
I usually don't like blatant questions in poetry but I love this. It is simple and stark. I feel the sense that someone is patient and deserving for their time to let go.
I also love the threat of the bird at the end. He makes me unsettled in the best of ways.