Third Edit: Lost Dreams

Third Edit: Lost Dreams

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03-31-2017, 03:08 AM

Hey all,
I really want to say thanks for all the feedback. It definitely gave me some major food for thought about this poem. I really felt like I was getting too comfortable in my poetry, and some of your comments made me look at this poem much differently than I have so far. Once again, all the feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thanks,
Richard

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Third Edit: Lost Dreams - by Richard - 03-30-2017, 05:43 AM

RE: Lost Dream - by burrealist - 03-30-2017, 05:49 AM

RE: Lost Dream - by Elizazile - 03-30-2017, 05:44 PM

RE: Lost Dream - by RiverNotch - 03-30-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: Lost Dream - by Richard - 03-31-2017, 03:08 AM

RE: First Edit: Lost Dream - by ellajam - 04-05-2017, 11:24 AM

RE: Second Edit: Lost Dream - by Richard - 06-12-2017, 12:48 PM

RE: Second Edit: Lost Dream - by ellajam - 06-12-2017, 07:15 PM

RE: Second Edit: Lost Dream - by Achebe - 06-12-2017, 08:16 PM

RE: Second Edit: Lost Dream - by nibbed - 06-13-2017, 02:07 AM