spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22
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spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22
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03-30-2017, 02:59 PM
(03-30-2017, 02:49 PM)Lizzie Wrote: I liked "new." Version 2 is my favorite. Yeah, you're right, there's nothing that says "new" better than "new". That word is the absurdly simple (and profound) heart of the poem. So... rev 5 it is.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-23-2017, 02:50 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-23-2017, 03:29 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-24-2017, 03:00 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:37 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-29-2017, 04:34 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-30-2017, 03:48 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 10:50 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by amaril - 03-30-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:47 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-30-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:59 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-31-2017, 05:12 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-31-2017, 01:11 AM
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