To the men (content: mild expletives, reference to rape)

[aschueler]

Echoing the above, I think the areas where your poem works the best are where you are showing your images instead of listing them, for example the Shakti/Kali lines as well as shedding skin (although shedding skin is a bit cliche). One of the most difficult parts of effective poetry is evoking what you mean to say without outright saying it.

The long line of statements reads a bit ranty, not so poetic but it has some good spots....and practice will facilitate more.