Matt's Story
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(03-24-2017, 05:53 AM)Todd Wrote:  Her eyes fixed on some distant
point beyond his shoulder. He turned
but saw nothing. (This is my favorite part. I can see it like I'm seeing it on film. "Some distant point" spells death so well.)

His father unlocked the door,
and moved her head as if to pose her, but (Where did this guy come from?)
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Matt's Story - by Todd - 03-24-2017, 05:53 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by just mercedes - 03-24-2017, 05:58 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Todd - 03-24-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Achebe - 03-24-2017, 06:18 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Wjames - 03-24-2017, 06:30 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:55 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Todd - 03-30-2017, 07:18 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by believer135 - 04-02-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Todd - 04-04-2017, 07:27 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by RiverNotch - 04-04-2017, 10:26 AM
RE: Matt's Story - by Todd - 04-07-2017, 01:27 AM



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