I Bought a Doll Today

[Todd]

Thanks for the feedback guys! Much appreciated. I'll address specific points in a minute, but just wanted to clear something up.

Kyrielle Elise is a play on kyrie eleison. I was trying to be clever, but I don't think it's working. I got the idea from the Kyrielle practice thread. http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-3518.html

I got it. I took it as a cabbage patch doll gets a poetic form's name.