Growing Up with Cerebral Palsy Revision 4

[Todd]

Okay Lizzie, I agreed with you about cleaning up the tenses. You also had some really good editorial catches. I made a few other very minor changes of my own. My feeling is that the more consistent tense helps the poem. I'm still debating the arrangement of the final lines (I may go with it or revert to the last arrangement--though really that's pretty minor).

Thanks for your good eye on this.

Best,

Todd