03-21-2017, 04:41 AM
So, I've got an edit, hopefully I've addressed everything except achebe's request for a more subtle meter, I have to think a bit longer on that, get the other kinks out first. I can't help but include phrases that crack me up when I think of them even when they're too silly, I hope some of you will take a look and let me know how it reads now. Thanks 
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