03-21-2017, 03:19 AM
L2 "fit"(s)
"my trusty ball jar
fit my old Oster blender,"
I have a problem with this image. Wouldn't one have to turn everything upside down twice to get it to work. It just seems a bit awkward and probably not very good for the blender. So for me anyway, this is a distraction which is not good for the poem. Don't get me wrong I think it is cool what you are trying to do, i.e., mix and match things such as the lid and the bowl, I think most can relate to that. I also realize this is in misc, so you can disregard what I write.
The last two lines are a puzzlement. I don't see how they apply to the first part of the poem, or even what sense they ultimately make.
Anyway it is a great idea, hope you continue to work on it.
Best,
dale
"my trusty ball jar
fit my old Oster blender,"
I have a problem with this image. Wouldn't one have to turn everything upside down twice to get it to work. It just seems a bit awkward and probably not very good for the blender. So for me anyway, this is a distraction which is not good for the poem. Don't get me wrong I think it is cool what you are trying to do, i.e., mix and match things such as the lid and the bowl, I think most can relate to that. I also realize this is in misc, so you can disregard what I write.
The last two lines are a puzzlement. I don't see how they apply to the first part of the poem, or even what sense they ultimately make.
Anyway it is a great idea, hope you continue to work on it.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.