03-20-2017, 02:44 PM
(03-20-2017, 12:11 PM)M_2quared Wrote: Hello! I felt that 'steeplechase' kind of made the poem a little bumpy in that section, in my opinion. Though, I do tend to read it slower since it has three syllables. Otherwise, it was well written! Good work!Hi, welcome to the Pigpen.
Thanks so much for identifying steeplechase as a bump in the read for you, that will help me in my edit.Putting my mod hat on, this post, with one point only, is more suited to the Basic workshop. There are different posting guidelines for each workshop, just click on each forum title to read them. Hope you enjoy the site.
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