Android's prospective
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(03-20-2017, 04:58 AM)Donald Q. Wrote:  I've changed some of the line breaks now because they were a bit janky, cheers Ella
I didn't edit this poem, just tossed in in for fun because I'm lazy, but I might come back to it.

And yes, prospective.
well, prospective is an adjective, so you should lose the possessive and change the inversion - Prospective Android - not really sure what that would mean but at least it would be grammatically  correct.
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Android's prospective - by Donald Q. - 03-18-2017, 08:14 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by ellajam - 03-18-2017, 10:28 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by Lizzie - 03-20-2017, 01:57 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by milo - 03-20-2017, 02:00 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by Donald Q. - 03-20-2017, 04:58 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by milo - 03-20-2017, 05:34 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by Donald Q. - 03-20-2017, 07:27 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by ellajam - 03-20-2017, 04:41 PM
RE: Android's prospective - by nibbed - 03-20-2017, 10:12 AM
RE: Android's prospective - by Donald Q. - 03-20-2017, 11:42 PM



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