03-20-2017, 05:34 AM
(03-20-2017, 04:58 AM)Donald Q. Wrote: I've changed some of the line breaks now because they were a bit janky, cheers Ellawell, prospective is an adjective, so you should lose the possessive and change the inversion - Prospective Android - not really sure what that would mean but at least it would be grammatically correct.
I didn't edit this poem, just tossed in in for fun because I'm lazy, but I might come back to it.
And yes, prospective.

