03-18-2017, 01:44 AM
That makes absolute sense, Todd. I did want to have sort of a double volta that the form affords but I think you are right about it not tying in well with the rest of the poem. I think the weaving ideas come easily for me and I was just being lazy. 
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, very useful, that last line sucked anyway.
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, very useful, that last line sucked anyway.
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