Opening A Small Window edit#1.1
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Thanks so much, crndl. I'll see how I can strengthen the meter where you tripped. I keep rewiting that last line, I'll try again. Smile
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Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 08:33 AM
RE: Taking What I Get - by CRNDLSM - 03-17-2017, 09:30 AM
RE: Taking What I Get - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: Taking What I Get - by Achebe - 03-17-2017, 09:57 AM
RE: Taking What I Get - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 10:31 AM
RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by ellajam - 03-21-2017, 04:41 AM
RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by Todd - 03-21-2017, 06:15 AM
RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by ellajam - 03-21-2017, 06:46 AM
RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by Lizzie - 03-22-2017, 02:34 AM
RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by ellajam - 03-22-2017, 03:18 AM



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