Opening A Small Window edit#1.1

Opening A Small Window edit#1.1

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03-17-2017, 09:45 AM

Thanks so much, crndl. I'll see how I can strengthen the meter where you tripped. I keep rewiting that last line, I'll try again. Smile

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Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 08:33 AM

RE: Taking What I Get - by CRNDLSM - 03-17-2017, 09:30 AM

RE: Taking What I Get - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 09:45 AM

RE: Taking What I Get - by Achebe - 03-17-2017, 09:57 AM

RE: Taking What I Get - by ellajam - 03-17-2017, 10:31 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window (title change Taking What I Get) - by Todd - 03-18-2017, 01:18 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window (title change Taking What I Get) - by ellajam - 03-18-2017, 01:44 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window (title change Taking What I Get) - by M_2quared - 03-20-2017, 12:11 PM

RE: Opening A Small Window (title change Taking What I Get) - by ellajam - 03-20-2017, 02:44 PM

RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by ellajam - 03-21-2017, 04:41 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by Todd - 03-21-2017, 06:15 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1 - by ellajam - 03-21-2017, 06:46 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by Lizzie - 03-22-2017, 02:34 AM

RE: Opening A Small Window edit#1.1 - by ellajam - 03-22-2017, 03:18 AM

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