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03-17-2017, 04:30 AM
Lizzie, some good points (whether you read obscure comic characters or not) some of which I'll adopt. Let me think about the ending some. Those two breaks (sun and adjusting) you suggest I'll probably adopt immediately.
Thanks, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Revision 2: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-01-2017, 07:14 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Donald Q. - 03-01-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-01-2017, 03:41 PM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by CRNDLSM - 03-17-2017, 03:34 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-17-2017, 03:40 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Lizzie - 03-17-2017, 04:26 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-17-2017, 04:30 AM
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