03-17-2017, 04:06 AM
Thanks guys, I like a lot of your thoughts, and will try to use some of them.
The "Fake News" title was meant to be regarding the fact that these pictures would inevitably posted to social media, presented in a way that makes the whole thing seem perfect. I think this is what has given rise to fake news, everyone is always presenting their life in the best possible light, so it doesn't seem strange when actually important things are similarly altered in the media. I might add something about posting to social media to the poem, but that's tough to write about. Or, I might just change the title to something that works better with what is already there.
The "Fake News" title was meant to be regarding the fact that these pictures would inevitably posted to social media, presented in a way that makes the whole thing seem perfect. I think this is what has given rise to fake news, everyone is always presenting their life in the best possible light, so it doesn't seem strange when actually important things are similarly altered in the media. I might add something about posting to social media to the poem, but that's tough to write about. Or, I might just change the title to something that works better with what is already there.

